This story focuses on Zero a little more ( not 100% probably 65%) It starts before The Nightmare Before Christmas movie. Please give me your opinions.
I fixed my eyes as my little childish mind told me to go closer to the white cloth. It whimpered as I touched its silk body. It was a cute white ghost dog! I feel in love with it as soon as I laid my eyes on its big black eyes. I felt its soft cloth like fur( is it just me or does Jack really like cloth, he has Sally and Zero, well I guess it’s just me because he is a ghost and I see him as a cloth, whatever)
I decided to take it home. The ghost dog was so sweet I don’t know how it doesn’t have a home. So I decided to try and find it his rightful owner. I posted many fliers around and I was about to give up when a knock was heard at the door. “I’m coming!” I called as I walked towards the door with the ghost puppy at his feet.
“Yes, um are you…” a rag doll stood in front of me, she was so gorgeous I could stare at her forever. Her face expression showed me that I was staring. I then came to reality, “Oh! How rude am I, Please come in, ……please….” I said motioning the girl in my house. “Oh, no need I.. Oh!” Sally said as I pushed her in my home.
I began to talk to her like I was her BFF, “ So, what is your name?!” I said. “ Oh, um, Sally, nice to meet you.” Said Sally as we shook hands, her soft cloth like, so soft, amazing, smooth, blue, hands. I asked her what she was doing here and she told me she was here for the puppy, or Sally called him Zero. It seemed that Sally saw how sad I was to part with the new puppy because Sally decided to let me keep Zero.
Narrating now cause I am bad at doing 1st person.
“ I want you to keep Zero for you to remember me, I know I will never forget you, we may have just met but you are now my only friend.” Said Sally. Jack almost cried because of that. “ My dearest friend, I will never forget you, may fate be kind and have us meet again in the future, for now goodbye.” I said. “ Goodbye, may fate let us meet again indeed.” Said Sally.
Then Sally left poor Jack who was just stricken with an arrow of love even though he didn’t know it. “ Well my boy, you are mine forever, Zero!” Said Jack. Zero leaped with joy, he loved Sally a lot but Dr. Finkelstien was really mean and it occurred to Zero this won’t be the last time he would see Sally.
• Okay this is sorta a short story so if I, or anybody that comments, come up with a good 2nd chapter I sure will write it!